Moriah Leila

Hello! It has been a long time since I have written a review, so please bare with me as I remember how. Also, be prepared because I am going to ...

I love this story, mostly because I have an obsession with pirates myself. You also have a way of describing things creatively. However, at times your descriptions can get a ...

Hello! I will be reviewing your poetry today. I want to start off by saying that I hate poetry, so the fact that I not only read your poem but ...

This is an interesting metaphor, but I like it. I think that is what good poetry does, makes you look at something old from a fresh perspective. So kudos on ...

Well, I think you have done a good job with this tender subject. Your descriptions were vivid and the emotion was realistic. I hope this isn't something that you've experienced ...

Well, I really liked this story, the characters were so interesting. I think my favorites were Violet and Dawn. You did such a marvelous job describing all of the other ...

This poem made me laugh, hopefully that was effect you were going for. I appreciate the effort you went to make sure that your poem rhymed, just remember that poems ...

I like the idea of a love letter straight from heaven. I certainly never thought of having the dead communicate with the living in such a touching way. When I ...

Hey there, NewHero recommended that I review your story, but it looks like everyone has already covered what I wanted to say. I enjoyed your story because at first I ...

Hey there. I think this is a good prologue. It is a very interesting plot. However, you need to work on several things. First of all, you can be very ...

So this one was not one of my favorites, it was quite confusing at times, and a lot of times I had to re-read paragraphs to try to understand exactly ...

Okay, so I have to give you major props for this one. I knew it was another mindless rant, but this time there was so much humor, that I really ...

Can I be brutally honest? While the humor is there, I felt like this was a long drawn-out rant over something incredibly petty. Seriously? You just used 774 words to ...

Yeah, I have to agree that this piece is rather difficult to critique. Basically everything on the side of constructive criticism that I was going to say, Critiq already said ...

Okay, not to sound redundant but Hippie is absolutely correct. Your story is very rushed and there seems to be a lot more telling than showing. We as your readers ...